Status Update

1. The truck stop as community and culture
Claim : That truckers are similar to cowboys with their freedom and to
travel wherever . As for the stop it is a like a comfort zone when they are long away
from home.
Style of argument : Toulmin Model

2. Goth Subcultures in Cyberspace.
Claim: Gothics uses the cyberspace world for a community as a means to communicate ,
and to spread invitations about their events to get more participation outside the Internet.
Style of argument: Classical Model

3. Transmissions from Camp Trans
Claim: That Trans-women has ever right to attend the MWMF as lesbian women.
Style of argument: Classical Model

4. House for the Homeless: A place to hang your hat
Claim : Homeless people were once people with a good life , until a bad situation occurred.
Despite that they have no home, or wealth , they have a dream or goal to succeed in
life like ever one else.
Style of argument : Rogerian Model

STATUS: I'm still researching on my topic trying to know
more about my subculture.I've already visited the filed site,
made notes about my observations, interviewed a couple of
people, and checked out some books for more research. I have
a found couple of things for my subculture like the norms
and beliefs and how the officers interact with each other.
I am just worried about my findings making five full pages
for peer review! What I'm really struggling with is figuring
exactly what I want to know about them and writing it. I guess
I'll just write about my observations for a rough draft and
figure out the rest from there. I'm plan on making another
visit to the site on Friday or next week.
Question: Are my ideas/observations are fully expressed and is clear in my paper?